Drabblessssss sorry this is taking so long but I'm trying to listen to Obama. >.>
1. KEI-kitty? He's already a kitty. XD Makoto, you are a sucker. 2. Bahaha, Daiki the bratty pretty puppy. He's be there way longer than any fling, Jake. 3. D'awwww stupid Daikio. Daiki's such a stupid gooshy dad. 4. Ford, stop taking in strays! Jeez. And some concrit-- I feel like you dun need the "unable to leave him" bit there. You could end the sentence there, and use the extra words elsewhere. 5. Aww... at least Aki has a friend now? Also it should be "now he was almost painfully aware". 6. I want to know what universe this exists in that anyone can actually get Eddie to DANCE. 7. I didn't believe him at first either! And this pairing feels a little wrong. >.> CARTER HE'S YOUR BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND, GOD.
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Date: 07/09/2012 02:45 am (UTC)1. KEI-kitty? He's already a kitty. XD Makoto, you are a sucker.
2. Bahaha, Daiki the bratty pretty puppy. He's be there way longer than any fling, Jake.
3. D'awwww stupid Daikio. Daiki's such a stupid gooshy dad.
4. Ford, stop taking in strays! Jeez. And some concrit-- I feel like you dun need the "unable to leave him" bit there. You could end the sentence there, and use the extra words elsewhere.
5. Aww... at least Aki has a friend now? Also it should be "now he was almost painfully aware".
6. I want to know what universe this exists in that anyone can actually get Eddie to DANCE.
7. I didn't believe him at first either! And this pairing feels a little wrong. >.> CARTER HE'S YOUR BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND, GOD.
Now I want pudding. Thanks a lot. :|